Thursday, January 18, 2007

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  • The rain begins to turn to snow.

  • EXT. DUPLEX – NIGHT

  • Nicholas staggers up the steps of the duplex. All the lights are on on his and Penelope’s side. The other side is dark except for the light of a television in the front room.

  • Nicholas’ neighbor Roberta Kleen sits on her side of the shared porch. She’s all bundled up.

  • ROBERTA KLEEN
  • I don’t find this chair comfortable at all.

  • NICHOLAS FREDLAND
  • Hey, Roberta.

  • ROBERTA KLEEN
  • It certainly has gotten cold.

  • NICHOLAS FREDLAND
  • (looking through the window)
  • Yeah, is your husband watching one of his shows?

  • ROBERTA KLEEN
  • You have to bundle yourself up if you’re going to be out in this kind of weather.

  • NICHOLAS FREDLAND
  • It sure is cold.

  • ROBERTA KLEEN
  • I’ve still got a few more years in me.

  • Nicholas realizes that the old woman isn’t paying attention to him.

  • NICHOLAS FREDLAND
  • Good talking to you.

  • INT. DUPLEX – NIGHT

  • Nicholas goes through the house and shuts off all the lights. No one else is home.

  • INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

  • Nicholas is alone in bed. As he’s about to fall asleep, someone or something sneezes violently in the night, and he comes awake with a start.

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